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10 Basic Rules of Screenwriting
- Feature film script should be between 95 and 120 pages in length.
Never longer. A script over 120 pages needs editing.
Never shorter. A script shorter than 90 pages is too short.
The perfect length is 100 pages for comedies, 110 for dramas.
Cheat your margins if you have to, but better yet write and cut to the correct length. - Do NOT use camera directions. Ever.
(Note: Historically, writers used to employ camera directions, but the practice is no longer in vogue.)
Do not use words like CAMERA, CLOSE UP, LONG SHOT, DOLLY, PAN, or anything else that refers to the camera.
Do not use CUT TO or any references to editing.
At the beginning of the script, you may use FADE IN.
At the end of the script, you may use FADE OUT.
Please use a maximum of two dissolves in the entire script. If any.
Dissolves are not generally well-received, disdained by directors and studio readers. - Dialogue should generally be one to three lines long. Only occasionally should dialogue exceed four lines. Keep it short and simple.
A few monologues may be acceptable, but even they should be broken up with action (e.g. ‘he drags on a cigarette’), so they are under ten lines in length. Long stretches of one character talking are boring and hard to read. - Scene description should be kept to a minimum.
Many studio executives and readers may actually skip over scene description. If they can’t get the story from the dialogue, some may feel frustrated and stop reading.
Scene description should be one to three lines in length, and never more than five lines without a break.
When describing significant amounts of action, break the description into logical paragraphs, separated by double spacing. - An entire scene – from one slug line to the next – ideally runs three pages or less (it can be as brief as a small fraction of a page). Never more than five pages in length. The average scene should be a page and a half or less. Larger, important scenes can run three or four pages. Please make certain the script keeps ‘moving’ or ‘flowing’ for the reader. If you have a great deal of dialogue or information, experiment with breaking the scene up into multiple locations (e.g. “Let’s get to the restaurant, and I’ll explain…”).
- Character names should begin with different letters so the reader can more easily distinguish them. Different numbers of syllables can also help (e.g. Stan, Sue, Sam and Sara is far more challenging for the reader than Susan, Drew, Alyssa, Charlie). In particular, characters that talk to one another should have uniquely different names (e.g. not ‘Lyle’ and ‘Kyle).
- If a particular character has few lines (half a dozen or so) and only appears in one or two scenes, it’s best to refer to that character by occupation (e.g. POLICEMAN, MAID, BARTENDER). This lets the reader know they do not have to worry about this character fitting into the story. Use a proper name only if important to do so or the character has a signficant effect on the story.
- Do NOT use parentheticals, except when absolutely essential. Typically, a parenthetical is used to introduce a line of dialogue, describing how that line should be read (e.g. angrily, laughing, nervously). Please make every effort to avoid this device and, if you must, limit to four or fewer your use of parentheticals. The litmus test is: is it likely the reader will misinterpret this line (sarcastic: “Sure I will.). Beginning writers often make the mistake of using parentheticals consistently throughout a screenplay.
- Slug lines – the first line of scene, describing time and place – always begin with INT. (interior) or EXT. (exterior). They always end with NIGHT or DAY. Do NOT use ‘Magic Hour’, ‘Late Afternoon’, or any other such departure. Only use ‘Morning’ or ‘Sunset’ if it is critical to the timeline of the story.
- Character names are capitalized in scene description only once, the very first time that character appears in the screenplay.
Sounds are capitalized (e.g. BANG).
Please don’t use this often or get carried away with capitalizing sounds (e.g. PATTER, PATTER, PATTER of feet as he SHUFFLED; or the faucet went DRIP, DRIP, DRIP as the kettle WHISTLED).
Stick to loud, important sounds. If in doubt, don’t capitalize.
Nothing else in scene description should be capitalized.
(Note: Long ago, writers sometimes included lighting effects, props and other capitlaized items, but these are no longer accepted practices).




Stuart Land on 03 Oct 2008 at 1:42 am #
Hi Gary,
What a guy! Thanks for sharing your knowledge. I have a questions on dialogue format I’ve never understood even though I’ve been a screenwriter twenty years and watched formatting change over time. I appreciate dropping all the cut to’s and capitalizing so many elements, and using the parenthetical correctly. What I still find very strange is the practice of forcing an action to break up dialogue rather than just using a paragraph break. Using an action usually means giving actor direction (as in you own example). Unless an action is absolutely necessary for an actor to deliver the line or know his or her character, I believe it is excess (plus takes up valuable page space). For the first fifteen years I wrote screenplays, I would just insert paragraph breaks for longer dialogue and never once was reprimanded, but in recent years, I’ve begun to be chided from the new bread of readers who seem to “go by the book” no matter what. As a novelist, I break up dialogue with action because there are no other artists interpreting my lines. Why is everyone so stringent on this rule when it doesn’t seem to make sense or serve the script writing or reading process? Thanks for your blog.
Dean on 06 Oct 2008 at 8:26 pm #
Strangely enough, virtually every screenplay I read — from successful films in the last 3-4 years — all are peppered if not doused with “We see” and Capital letters and parentheticals and A BEAT and the like.
Am I missing something?
Denice Lewis on 14 Oct 2008 at 11:09 am #
Good Morning, Gary!
Thank you for these rules. They are extremely helpful.
I have a question that pertains to the use of ‘continue.’ It is my understanding that (CONT’D) is no longer used if a character speaks twice in a row unless the speech runs over to the next page. Is that correct? In the past I have used them and they take up a lot of lines in a script.
Thank you for your time.
Sincerely,
Denice
Herb on 14 Oct 2008 at 12:15 pm #
Gary,
Very useful summary. Thank you.
–Herb
Ellen Domanska on 14 Oct 2008 at 5:52 pm #
Gary,
thanks a lot for providing us the updated information about script formating. It very valuable for beginner screenwriter to learn strait from high level professional as you are.
In addition, in the interview with Hal Crousmun, I was imptessed by your style to approch the novice screenwriters. You know better what writes need that they do.
Best of luck in your business and teaching!
Greetings from Rome, Italy.
Ellen Domanska
Innocent Bystander on 21 Oct 2008 at 3:51 pm #
We all owe Gary, and folks like him who post information like this, a debt of gratitude.
If you ever wonder why these kind of lists are important, then please watch the first few episodes of any season of American Idol. Pay careful attention to the applicants who are sure they are the next idol, even though they do not sing in any group, cannot carry a tune, have no stage presence other than to have everyone laugh at them.
In screenwriting terms, they are all of us, you and me, when we think the rules don’t apply to us.
But you might say, “I’ve heard that you can break the rules if you are good enough, and I am good enough. This screenplay will be the best screenplay ever written. The world will beat a path to my door to bit on this one. This one will sell for a million bucks. I can break the rules, because I am just that good.”
Right.
Gary said it above, if we want someone in the industry, anyone in the industry to read our masterpiece, then we must listen to those who have been there and written that.
Honour Leigh on 23 Oct 2008 at 6:40 pm #
This was very helpful Gary; I’m working on my first script and would have made a few of these blunders, as I’ve had no formal training. So, thankyou!
Gary Mitchell on 01 Nov 2008 at 1:26 pm #
In your short “10 Rules,” I gathered quit an impressive amount of information. I’ve been writing for several years, bu now I think I need to go back, take all of the screenplays, and re-write or change them. Thanks so much.
erik on 26 Feb 2009 at 1:01 pm #
“There are no rules to screenwriting.”
- Charlie Kaufman
But, honestly, thank you for the traditional information.
Antonion Borges on 28 Feb 2009 at 3:11 pm #
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Quinn on 09 Mar 2009 at 8:18 pm #
Thank you sir for your useful information,
I honestly think now that completing my screenplay will not be finished as soon as I thought. I wish there was a way that i could just write the scenes out without adding all the camera angles, setting, and time to it and add all that later. I have written a summary about 3 pages long and have let people read it they like it. I then later wrote out scenes that happen in the movie and described it to random people like on the bus. It’s always got a laugh thou it follows the parody feel it covers an area that hasn’t been done before.
So my question is this, Is there an easier way to get the ideas out of my head and written down so i can sell my movie? Is there a machine that while i think about the movie it just writes everything i’m thinking about? Just a joke. Any help would be much appreciated.
thank you
Quinn
Frauke Watson on 01 May 2009 at 2:08 pm #
Thank you for a great and concise treatise. I am not a screenwriter myself but have translated many scripts, so it makes total sense to me. And I think that your guidelines can be adapted to all types of writing: Keep it simple, to the point, no information that is not necessary or does not support the unfolding of the plot. We must be able to see where we are through the action not the signposts. In a nutshell - thanks.